My Favorites Hobbies
In my university, President University there is such exracurricular that do things directly to nature and train our phsycal it called Varsity.
Varsity Expedition 29-30 October 2015
This club covers the three of my hobbies. first and also the main activity of this club is rock climbing. i really like rock climbing its challenging, needs our carefulness in taking step and if we finished, we reach the top.
the second this club goes out to the really rocks which takes us directly to nature and im so into nature. we can feel the nature together,
My Vasrsity's Senior was training hard
the last in varsity we will have body training also coaching which i do routine for health because thats also myhobby to body trainning. so that are all my hobbies that i found in a club at president university.
Varsity Expedition 29-30 October 2015
This club covers the three of my hobbies. first and also the main activity of this club is rock climbing. i really like rock climbing its challenging, needs our carefulness in taking step and if we finished, we reach the top.
the second this club goes out to the really rocks which takes us directly to nature and im so into nature. we can feel the nature together,
the last in varsity we will have body training also coaching which i do routine for health because thats also myhobby to body trainning. so that are all my hobbies that i found in a club at president university.
I think I have a little regret now that I did not join Varsity. Hehehe
BalasHapusI think I have a little regret now that I did not join Varsity. Hehehe
BalasHapusHi olivia, you have great hobbies! Keep it up
BalasHapushi oliv, your hobby very healthy and keep the spirit :
BalasHapusWhat a nice and challenging hobbies! Keep it up :)
BalasHapusthe strong girl,improved your hobbie into the skill!!!
BalasHapusHello there Oliv,
BalasHapusInteresting. You're into nature and it means you take care of it as well. Nice hobbies and concern. I just want to remind that perhaps you can fix some words like 'thats' to 'that's'and 'myhobby' to 'my hobby'. Thank you. :)
hello anti :) its a cool paragraph
BalasHapusplease bring me there ahhaa
btw you may recheck some of your word anti like "so that are all my hobbies" change it to be "so these are all my hobbies"
and do not forget to underlined the main topic
then it will be a gorgeous paragraph
keep writing girl :*
Aww aww awesome my sistt just keep spirit and we can break the vertical limit together yaa luvss����
BalasHapusAwwww sounds amazing that you like hiking and join varsity :)
BalasHapusBe strong :)
Your hobby is very unique, hope you can always develop the potential in yourself with your hobby.
BalasHapushei oliv!!
BalasHapusa good paragraph. keep it up:))))
it's very good,I'm interested in rock climbing,but I'm afraid of high places,so I never tried.
BalasHapusit's very good,I'm interested in rock climbing,but I'm afraid of high places,so I never tried.
BalasHapusMaybe you mean "extracurricular " not "exracurricular"
BalasHapusGood pharagraph btw . Nice 👍
Very nice and inspirational. Keep doing it
BalasHapusThat so awesome olivia
BalasHapusThat's really awesome!!! I am so proud of you. And inspired by you, because now i was in the same hobby just like you. So i am so proud too can be a part of Varsity ��
BalasHapusThat's really awesome!!! I am so proud of you. And inspired by you, because now i was in the same hobby just like you. So i am so proud too can be a part of Varsity ��
BalasHapusThat so awesome olivia
BalasHapusAwesome Olivia! You're strong girl :)
BalasHapusgood nice olivia
BalasHapusnice olivia
BalasHapusHi Oliv.
BalasHapusWow, it's amazing hobby. I hope I can be same with you. By the way,don't forget to underlined the topic sentences. That's all and good luck, yeah
Hai oliv, you have a nice hobby. I think in last paragraph you have to use i should be I.
BalasHapusGood job oliv!!
Nice hobby, keep it up!
BalasHapus