Selasa, 15 November 2016

Research report about activities will be undertaken when the semester break

  1.Topic sentence

Paragraph 2 : semester break some students return home to meet the family because they only have a chance when holiday for gathering with family.

Paragraph 3 : some of them having fun with friends visiting places that they love.

Paragraph 4 :  and there are cooking different types of dishes they like throughout the day

Paragraph 5 : most of them sleeping, watching movies, playing games at home

   2. write a draft of the concluding paragraph for your composition. It can either summarize or evaluate the results, or it can predict the future     most of them filled with vacation time doing things that are really their love 

         Research report about  activities will be undertaken when the                          
                                             Semester break

  break semester is imminent and we got a 2 weeks time to relax for a while, but how they fill their holidays? I asked a few friends to the class about what they will do to spend their vacation time his answer is different and I get his report.

     semester break some students return home to meet the family because they only have a chance when holiday for gathering with family. because different city then that's what makes them greatly missed family especially for those parents who have not been accustomed to separating from parents was very painful, and when the holidays come they are very happy because they can meet family.

        some of them having fun with friends visiting the places they love. for those nature lovers they will visit the beaches and mountain climbing in their opinion it was very pleasant and made them feel comfortable being in nature. and they were looking forward to the coming holidays because only during holidays they could feel the wonderful atmosphere and comfortable while on the beach or the mountains.

    especially women who like to cook various dishes as they cook in the hostel when they can not do the hobby. they missed eating their own cooking and do it so that when the holidays arrive later they spent time with the cooking.

      most of them sleeping, watching movies, playing games at home. especially men they really wanted a long time to sleep, watch movies and play games, they just want to do the three things that make them feel comfortable as in a normal day they can not do it because I was busy with the tasks and must learn.
 




6 komentar:

  1. Hai olive, it's good article but I think your sentence will be better if you fix it.

    BalasHapus
  2. Hi oliv!
    im sorry to say, i find one of the mistake is "i asked a few friends to the class" i think that should be " i was asked a few friend in the class"
    Good writing!

    BalasHapus
  3. Hi oliv!
    Nice paragraph that you had described there. But, based on i had read before you should check again about capitalization and not to mention you need to give more attention about your grammar. Actually, I'm really like your paragraph. Nice job :)

    BalasHapus
  4. hi, oliv, I think you need to recheck your capital letter. This is a very interesting article. Keep it up. Good job. Your english is gradually improving.

    BalasHapus
  5. hi, oliv, I think you need to recheck your capital letter. This is a very interesting article. Keep it up. Good job. Your english is gradually improving.

    BalasHapus
  6. hi olve, your blog pay attention capitalition, and i think you dont have the conlusion
    thanks

    BalasHapus