Outline
Thesis : I think the lecturers are responsible for motivating students to study and give a
good impact for students
Argument 1 : Because if
the students hate the lecturers, learning will not be the spirit
Argument 2 : the
only person who can motivate students in the classroom is the lecturers
Argument 3 : lecturers who give spirit to make
students feel comfortable learning
Counter argument : many people say that the motivation of lecturers are not as important as
the students are adults and know which ones are good and which are bad
Conclusions :I
think lecturers have a considerable influence on students,
because no student lecturers will not know the science although she studied science itself
because no student lecturers will not know the science although she studied science itself
Essay
lecturer motivation given to students for
me is very helpful for the student's motivation to be aware and want to do
something useful without coercion from others.
then
the students also have to love the lecturers so that the learning process
becomes effective if the students do not like the lecturer then the learning
process will not be effective and science given by the lecturer will be useless
and learning activities to be in vain.
lecturers
were very instrumental in motivating his students in the classroom, but
everyone can also motivate each others. motivation given by professors can build a
spirit of learning for the student, because then the students can see the
results of the study. if the first of his professors did not study hard so she
can not become a teacher like now. from which students can see the results of
the study and will be the spirit of learning to achieve their dreams diverse.
spirit given lecturers were very helpful for me because with the encouragement I began
to believe my dream. I believe my dream will come true with the way study hard
and try hard, learning is not difficult just takes willingness bigger than
yourself without coercion from others, if someone has a big dream then believe
that dream will come true if they want to try and learn diligently.
but most people think that the
motivation of lecturers are not important because they think students are
adults and can distinguish between what is good and what is bad, this
presumption is contrary to my thinking, because no one's motivation will not go
forward and will not be successful without their motivation would go on to
become lazy and so their dreams will not be realized.
I think the motivation of lecturers is
very important and useful addition to build the spirit of learning also can
realize the dream of those who have a great willingness to learn and work hard
untu without despair and keep trying if it fails.
Hi olivia
BalasHapusyour vocabulary is nice and your grammar also
But I think you may change "lecturer motivation have given to students. Especially for me, because it is very helpful for the student's motivation to be aware".
Hello Oliv
BalasHapusI think that your essay is good and it prove that your english is has been improved.
You ought to make clear about your position (agree or disagree) according this motion which is lecturers are responsible for motivating students to learn especially in the thesis
Also give the reason or outline of each arguments in the first paragraph
Don't forget to use capital letter based on the rule
There are some mistakes like "I think the motivation of lecturers is...". It will be better if you change it into "I think that the motivation from lecturers are"
That's all and keep practicing, dear
Hi olivia!
BalasHapusYou have a Good article and I think You are expressing your idea and position very well in every paragraph.
keep practicing
Good job😊
hi olive. actually i'm not agree with your paragraph because you are not children anymore. thank you.
BalasHapus