Selasa, 06 Desember 2016

Lecturers are responsible for motivating students to learn

  
Outline 
 
Thesis : I think the lecturers  are  responsible for motivating students to study and give a
 good impact for students

Argument 1 : Because if the students hate the lecturers, learning will not be the spirit

Argument 2 :  the only person who can motivate students in the classroom is the lecturers

Argument 3 : lecturers who give spirit to make students feel comfortable learning

Counter argument : many people say that the motivation of lecturers are not as important as 
the students are adults and know which ones are good and which are bad

Conclusions :I think lecturers have a considerable influence on students, 
because no student lecturers  will not know the science although she studied science itself

Essay

      lecturer motivation given to students for me is very helpful for the student's motivation to be aware and want to do something useful without coercion from others.
      then the students also have to love the lecturers so that the learning process becomes effective if the students do not like the lecturer then the learning process will not be effective and science given by the lecturer will be useless and learning activities to be in vain.
       lecturers were very instrumental in motivating his students in the classroom, but everyone can also motivate each others. motivation given by professors can build a spirit of learning for the student, because then the students can see the results of the study. if the first of his professors did not study hard so she can not become a teacher like now. from which students can see the results of the study and will be the spirit of learning to achieve their dreams diverse.
       spirit given lecturers were very helpful for me because with the encouragement I began to believe my dream. I believe my dream will come true with the way study hard and try hard, learning is not difficult just takes willingness bigger than yourself without coercion from others, if someone has a big dream then believe that dream will come true if they want to try and learn diligently.
       but most people think that the motivation of lecturers are not important because they think students are adults and can distinguish between what is good and what is bad, this presumption is contrary to my thinking, because no one's motivation will not go forward and will not be successful without their motivation would go on to become lazy and so their dreams will not be realized.
       I think the motivation of lecturers is very important and useful addition to build the spirit of learning also can realize the dream of those who have a great willingness to learn and work hard untu without despair and keep trying if it fails.

4 komentar:

  1. Hi olivia
    your vocabulary is nice and your grammar also
    But I think you may change "lecturer motivation have given to students. Especially for me, because it is very helpful for the student's motivation to be aware".

    BalasHapus
  2. Hello Oliv
    I think that your essay is good and it prove that your english is has been improved.
    You ought to make clear about your position (agree or disagree) according this motion which is lecturers are responsible for motivating students to learn especially in the thesis
    Also give the reason or outline of each arguments in the first paragraph
    Don't forget to use capital letter based on the rule
    There are some mistakes like "I think the motivation of lecturers is...". It will be better if you change it into "I think that the motivation from lecturers are"
    That's all and keep practicing, dear

    BalasHapus
  3. Hi olivia!
    You have a Good article and I think You are expressing your idea and position very well in every paragraph.

    keep practicing


    Good job😊

    BalasHapus
  4. hi olive. actually i'm not agree with your paragraph because you are not children anymore. thank you.

    BalasHapus