Selasa, 13 Desember 2016

 My three future goals

Outline

Plan your letter. Think of your three goals. Write a topic sentence for each one.

1.     got a great gpa in each semester make my parents happy

2.     smooth and fluent in English 


3.      to be useful for many people

 Write a conclusion for your letter in the space provided.
 It should give an evaluation of your goals.

 conclusion, of the three goals that I have set to achieve it is not easy but I am sure the effort and 
hard work I did then my goal will be achieved therefore I will keep trying and not give up.

     Do you have idea,for you get goals in university? So I have some idea to get the goals in university.
 Here I write articles for myself, which is about the three goals that will I accomplish now
 The first is got a great GPA in each semester, the second is smooth and fluent in english
 and the third is to be useful in order many people, so let’s see.
    Here I write articles for myself, which is about the three goals that will I accomplish now.
The first is I want to get gpa that good that my parents happy my way to achieve that dream
is to continue to learn and work hard if it fails I will continue to try and not despair
I will realize my dream of the first in that way.
     My second wish is fluent in the English language because I think English is an essential
language and an international language that must be mastered by many people in
addition to the existence of economic asean if our nation Indonesia can not
speak English we would also be very easily deceived a lot of people remember
the economic asean and I think it was also very cool if we graduated with the
other majors and was fluent in English.

      the third one I want to be useful for many people both now and in the future,
 I will do my best to help the slightest, although I only helped a little but of great value for some people
 so even in my family really wanted to be a useful person in my family, maybe like my first goal,
 I will achieve it by diligent study and work hard in order to become a successful person and can 
 be useful for many people.
       conclusion, of the three goals that I have set to achieve it is not easy but I am sure the effort and 
hard work I did then my goal will be achieved therefore I will keep trying and not give up.


 

8 komentar:

  1. Why every sentence looking mess? It's not organized, I mean not the grammar, words or structure but how it shown up in this page (my screen). It's not pop up as a good form of paragraph.

    BalasHapus
  2. Why every sentence looking mess? It's not organized, I mean not the grammar, words or structure but how it shown up in this page (my screen). It's not pop up as a good form of paragraph.

    BalasHapus
    Balasan

    1. I also dont understand why can not tidy vina but before I post all looks alright and after posted all be messed up but I will continue to try to re-edit

      Hapus
  3. Hi Oliv..
    it's a nice article about your personal goal. I hope that you can accomplish your personal goal within 4 years.
    Overall, I Think you should recheck sentence by sentence to revised it.
    and I found error sentence. should be"The first is I want to get GPA that good that my parents happy my way to achieving that dream"
    thank you...

    BalasHapus
  4. You already reorganized everything oliv! Thats a very good job! I didn't notice anything wrong from grammar or the usement of capital words. This is better than ever!👏

    BalasHapus
  5. You already reorganized everything oliv! Thats a very good job! I didn't notice anything wrong from grammar or the usement of capital words. This is better than ever!👏

    BalasHapus
  6. Hi Oliv, I like your article but you should pay attention for capitalization. Keep going up

    BalasHapus
  7. Hi oliv!
    Nice article. You make easily to read but I think you must fix your position.

    Keep practicing

    Good job😊

    BalasHapus