My three future goals

Outline

Plan your letter. Think of your three goals. Write a topic sentence for each one.

1.     got a great gpa in each semester make my parents happy

2.     smooth and fluent in English 

3.      to be useful for many people

 Write a conclusion for your letter in the space provided.
 It should give an evaluation of your goals.

 conclusion, of the three goals that I have set to achieve it is not easy but I am sure the effort and 
hard work I did then my goal will be achieved therefore I will keep trying and not give up.

     Do you have idea,for you get goals in university? So I have some idea to get the goals in university.
 Here I write articles for myself, which is about the three goals that will I accomplish now
 The first is got a great GPA in each semester, the second is smooth and fluent in english

 and the third is to be useful in order many people, so let’s see.

    Here I write articles for myself, which is about the three goals that will I accomplish now.
The first is I want to get gpa that good that my parents happy my way to achieve that dream
is to continue to learn and work hard if it fails I will continue to try and not despair
I will realize my dream of the first in that way.

     My second wish is fluent in the English language because I think English is an essential
language and an international language that must be mastered by many people in
addition to the existence of economic asean if our nation Indonesia can not
speak English we would also be very easily deceived a lot of people remember
the economic asean and I think it was also very cool if we graduated with the
other majors and was fluent in English.


      the third one I want to be useful for many people both now and in the future,
 I will do my best to help the slightest, although I only helped a little but of great value for some people
 so even in my family really wanted to be a useful person in my family, maybe like my first goal,
 I will achieve it by diligent study and work hard in order to become a successful person and can 
 be useful for many people.
       conclusion, of the three goals that I have set to achieve it is not easy but I am sure the effort and 
hard work I did then my goal will be achieved therefore I will keep trying and not give up.




 

Lecturers are responsible for motivating students to learn

  

Outline 

Thesis : I think the lecturers  are  responsible for motivating students to study and give a

 good impact for students

Argument 1 : Because if the students hate the lecturers, learning will not be the spirit

Argument 2 :  the only person who can motivate students in the classroom is the lecturers

Argument 3 : lecturers who give spirit to make students feel comfortable learning

Counter argument : many people say that the motivation of lecturers are not as important as 

the students are adults and know which ones are good and which are bad

Conclusions :I think lecturers have a considerable influence on students, 
because no student lecturers  will not know the science although she studied science itself

Essay

      lecturer motivation given to students for me is very helpful for the student's motivation to be aware and want to do something useful without coercion from others.

      then the students also have to love the lecturers so that the learning process becomes effective if the students do not like the lecturer then the learning process will not be effective and science given by the lecturer will be useless and learning activities to be in vain.

       lecturers were very instrumental in motivating his students in the classroom, but everyone can also motivate each others. motivation given by professors can build a spirit of learning for the student, because then the students can see the results of the study. if the first of his professors did not study hard so she can not become a teacher like now. from which students can see the results of the study and will be the spirit of learning to achieve their dreams diverse.

       spirit given lecturers were very helpful for me because with the encouragement I began to believe my dream. I believe my dream will come true with the way study hard and try hard, learning is not difficult just takes willingness bigger than yourself without coercion from others, if someone has a big dream then believe that dream will come true if they want to try and learn diligently.

       but most people think that the motivation of lecturers are not important because they think students are adults and can distinguish between what is good and what is bad, this presumption is contrary to my thinking, because no one's motivation will not go forward and will not be successful without their motivation would go on to become lazy and so their dreams will not be realized.

       I think the motivation of lecturers is very important and useful addition to build the spirit of learning also can realize the dream of those who have a great willingness to learn and work hard untu without despair and keep trying if it fails.

part 1

Research report about activities will be undertaken when the semester break

  1.Topic sentence

Paragraph 2 : semester break some students return home to meet the family because they only have a chance when holiday for gathering with family.

Paragraph 3 : some of them having fun with friends visiting places that they love.

Paragraph 4 :  and there are cooking different types of dishes they like throughout the day

Paragraph 5 : most of them sleeping, watching movies, playing games at home

   2. write a draft of the concluding paragraph for your composition. It can either summarize or evaluate the results, or it can predict the future     most of them filled with vacation time doing things that are really their love 

         Research report about  activities will be undertaken when the                          

                                             Semester break

  break semester is imminent and we got a 2 weeks time to relax for a while, but how they fill their holidays? I asked a few friends to the class about what they will do to spend their vacation time his answer is different and I get his report.

     semester break some students return home to meet the family because they only have a chance when holiday for gathering with family. because different city then that's what makes them greatly missed family especially for those parents who have not been accustomed to separating from parents was very painful, and when the holidays come they are very happy because they can meet family.

        some of them having fun with friends visiting the places they love. for those nature lovers they will visit the beaches and mountain climbing in their opinion it was very pleasant and made them feel comfortable being in nature. and they were looking forward to the coming holidays because only during holidays they could feel the wonderful atmosphere and comfortable while on the beach or the mountains.

    especially women who like to cook various dishes as they cook in the hostel when they can not do the hobby. they missed eating their own cooking and do it so that when the holidays arrive later they spent time with the cooking.

      most of them sleeping, watching movies, playing games at home. especially men they really wanted a long time to sleep, watch movies and play games, they just want to do the three things that make them feel comfortable as in a normal day they can not do it because I was busy with the tasks and must learn.

An important day

                                        An important day : when i broke my leg

        When I was six years old I was still in kindergarten,  at that moment I became stubborn problem child. any ban my parents always I argued and did not want to obey.  At hat time I did not reflect the behavior of girls like my friends with men and play games male.

       at that time I had a high fever and my sister would go to the mosque to learn the Quran, in sickness did I whine to join and my parents forbid because my situation is not good, but I argue and was eventually allowed to go. when we arrived at the mosque we learned with teachers, recess bell was sounded all the students cheered. all students out of mosques and perform various activities such as play, snack cakes etc. My sister forbade me to leave the mosque and told to remain seated in the mosque and when I said yes she bought cakes and drinks.

      after my sister out and play I was directly outside and ignored her ban. I saw my male friends across the street and I would like him. when I cross the street I do not see a motorcycle speeding and slammed into me. consequently my left foot fracture, and I could not walk in a long time libertine. since then I feel born again like a baby who can not do anything, like a spoiled child who always helped in doing anything, after recovering and could go on as usual I began to realize that parents know best for their children, and since then I have always tried to obey every command and ban my parents until now.

Problems and Solutions : Promiscuity

Problem and Solution Essay

1. introductions

      Jakarta is the capital city Indonesia located on the island of java. In Jakarta many industries and large enterprises. Because the Indonesia capital Jakarta many people from different areas come to seek work,school and be willing to live Jakarta slum environment.

2.writing about problem

a. how many problem are discussed ?

- One main problem leading to other problems.

b. what are they ?

- promiscuity damage the morale of the nation, the erosion of local culture due to globalization causes strangers into Indonesian culture as a whole without the filter

c. what expressions are introduce the problem ?

- In Jakarta, according to the National Strategy for Adolescent Health Research....

-There are many causes of teenagers do promiscuity. Cause every teenager do promiscuity....

-Mental unhealthy make many teens feel proud of the association which is actually an association that is not appropriate.....

d. how are the problems ilustrated futhure ?

-Promiscuity is a form of deviant behavior that go beyond the limits of existing norms...

-Teenagers are unstable emotionally vulnerable individuals are not controlled by the right of self-control...

-Promiscuity has a very negative impact and could destroy the future of adolescents....

e. what  results are discussed for each problem ?

    Promiscuity is a form of deviant behavior that go beyond the limits norm or causes teenagers to free association because of a lack of grip of adolescent life in terms of belief or religion, emotional instability adolescents, the negative influence of the mass media, the lack of sex education that is right and proper, the lack of parental supervision, mistakes in the mix and adolescent mental unhealthy because mentally unhealthy makes teens feel proud of the social which is actually the wrong crowd.

3. writing about solutions

a.many solutions are given ?

-three

b.what are they ?

- firslyt,Expand socialize the danger of promiscuity to teenagers. Promiscuity is often done because it could be they do not know the impact. Information about the harm caused by promiscuity is in need continues to spread among the young.

- secondly,Many activities are positive. Promiscuity is usually carried out by young people that a lot of empty time. Well, to anticipate this, we can divert our time for positive activities. For example participating in social organizations, pursue his hobbies and develop it into a business area that generates and others.

- thirdly,Correcting perspective. Fixing perspective by trying to be optimistic and live in reality, that teens should be educated from childhood to have no delusion that is not in accordance with his ability so that when teenagers get their disappointment will be able to respond positively.

c. how would the solutions be implemented?

- Need to socialize, especially for some schools about danger promiscuity and its impact.

-the school should give awards to students who excel in academic or non-academic so that other students interested in joining the organization or extracurricular activities at school so that Students being busy with positive activities

-must undertake positive activities on their own volition without any coercion from parents so that they feel comfortable with what they are doing and can do it with optimism

d. what verb capital structures are used to the make the suggestion?

- need to

- should

- must

e. conclusions

     Parents should pay attention to what activities are carried her child to provide education about sex and relationships child see her if her children hanging out in the neighborhood are not good parents should quickly take action so that his children do not fall promiscuity.

ONE OF JAKARTAS'S BIGGEST PROBLEM : PROMISCUITY

          Jakarta is the capital city indonesia located on the island of java. In jakarta many industries and large enterprises. Because the Indonesia capital jakarta many people from different areas come to seek work, school and be willing to live jakarta slum environment.

Because of bad economic conditions and levels of demand then they are willing to do to anythingin way which is not good for the earning money.

          In Jakarta, according to the National Strategy for Adolescent Health Research conducted by the Department of Health and Survey says 5.3 percent of high school students have had sex. The Ministry of Health in 2009 to do research in four cities, namely Jakarta, Medan, Bandung and Surabaya showed 35.9% of adolescents have friends already had sexual intercourse before marriage and 6.9% of respondents have had sexual intercourse before marriage.

           There are many causes of teenagers do promiscuity. Cause every teenager doing different possibilities of free association, but it all stems from a lack of grip is the main cause of adolescent life in beliefs or religious and emotional instability adolescents. This causes uncontrollable adolescent behavior so do promiscuity. Generally, the causes of the rampant promiscuity in Indonesia is also due to the negative influence of the mass media such as television, magazines, and so are many attach images - images that should not be shown, In addition, the lack of sex education that is right and proper, weak supervision of parents, mistakes in the mix and adolescent mental unhealthy form the cause of the rampant promiscuity in Indonesia, especially our capital city, Jakarta.

           Mental unhealthy make many teens feel proud of the association which is actually an association that is not appropriate, but they do not understand because of their understanding is lacking. Where emotional instability spurred the formation of bad personality can easily make them entangled promiscuity.

The following is a solution to prevent promiscuity first Expand to socialize the danger of promiscuity to teenagers. Promiscuity is often done because it could be they do not know the impact. Information about the harm caused by promiscuity is in need continues to spread among the young. Hopefully, they know the impact of promiscuity and usable information for consideration of his senses.

          The second lot of positive activity. Promiscuity is usually carried out by young people that a lot of empty time. Well, to anticipate this, we can divert our time for positive activities. For example participating in social organizations, pursue his hobbies and develop it into a business area that generates and others. Thus, his youth will tercurahkan for positive things and a little time to think about negative things like the free association. Fixing that all three perspectives.Fixing perspective by trying to be optimistic and live in reality, that teens should be educated from childhood to have no delusion that is not in accordance with his ability so that when teenagers get their disappointment will be able to respond positively.  Parents should pay attention to what activities are carried her child to provide education about sex and relationships child see her if her children hanging out in the neighborhood are not good parents should quickly take action so that his children do not fall promiscuity.